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In this savory moment.
   Full moon in the sky glowing,
     a smokey yellow

Clear skys revealing,
   The jet black back drop.
Perfect for showing the stellar display of cosmic glory.

Laying in a rose petal covered bed with her,
   brown hair washing over the pillow
like the oceans tide on a sandy beach.

No chemical could ever create this...


       Pure Bliss

As my moist lips press...
    against..
her soft as rose petal lips.
    Tasting the purity of life...

  on each and every taste bud.

As i explore the depths of her,
    mouth with an eager toung
only to get in tangled with hers.

Losing my self in this night
of raw lust,
   forbidden extice.
I find my self lost,
    entrapped
in her beautiful blue eyes.
   not noticing her
        soft...
           delicate finger tips
running threw my
         thick...
       Dark...
         Brown hair.
only to discover her
          Rose petal lips
on my ear lob slowly driving me crazy

Both laying here,
   tied up
in each others bare bodies
exposing our selves...
    exposing out fears,
      Feelings...
     fates...         
©2005-2009 ~trooper55
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Author's Comments

Te exsitement to post this one was unreal as i wrote it at work. This one i can say is poetry for only the image in my head drove me to wirte this one. It ook some time and lines came out of no where for this but i really like this one alot.

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:iconrockafellachik:
it's beautiful, good job. ;) :highfive:

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:icontrooper55:
thanks so much

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:iconlm0989:
I think that this is a great poem and that this author should be published in a hurry if he hasnt been already.
:iconzeroaquarius1588:
Marvelous Job!!! Truly inspiring!!! ^_^

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:icontrooper55:
thanks so much for that it made my day, and i think some crappy web site published my work

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I'm A fire fighter, I'm Just a normal Man, that is willing to give it all up.
:icontrooper55:
thanks much man

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I'm A fire fighter, I'm Just a normal Man, that is willing to give it all up.
:iconzeroaquarius1588:
You are most Welome!!! ^_^

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"I'm tired of this childish banter..."
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Incredible poem that's written very well. Love the style of the poem too. :clap:

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:iconlm0989:
Your very welcome but I have to give credit where credit is due and that was a great poem

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